Jumat, 10 Agustus 2012

Sad Story - Not A Full Version(Updated)



Sad Story
Sandy, a 26 years old woman can’t believe what just happened. This night, her husband has been  killed in front of her. She is now sitting in front of his dead body calmly while her tears drops and fall to the body. This family is now ruined. Her husband Rage has been killed when he caught some people sneak in this house and found out if they are going to steal Rage grandfather’s treasure. This treasure is very valuable for his family. The Treasure is one of the one most wanted treasure in the pirate history. And now, those ‘pirate’ have taken the treasure and the founder’s grandson too. Rage killed by a Shotgun bullets that launched by the ‘pirate’.
Nothing, Sandy cant does anything. Now she is powerless.   She doesn’t even can call the police or, at least the ambulance to try to survive her husband. She is powerless. She just crying and staring at her husband body.  She drops more tears again as like it’s the end of the day.
Later, in the morning when their helpers are going to cook some breakfast, he found Sandy  and Rage  lied on the stairway. With their clothes full of blood, Mr. Antonie, the helper quickly picked up the phone and call for the police. He thought that they must be murdered, or else kill each other.  But, he found that Sandy was still alive when he check their body and found out if Sandy is still breathing, but not with Rage, which got hit by 3 bullets. He then help Sandy to stand when she suddenly wakes up. He tell Sandy to stop crying and make Sandy some breakfast. A toast and a cup of tea. And it makes she happy. And they married and live happily

1 komentar:

  1. You described the story beautifully.
    I can deeply sympathize with Sandy< and am now wondering how Sandy will deal with this hardship.

    Note: Check again the use of passive voice. XD

    BalasHapus

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