Sad Story
Sandy, a 26 years old woman can’t believe
what just happened. This night, her husband has been killed in front of her. She is now sitting in
front of his dead body calmly while her tears drops and fall to the body. This
family is now ruined. Her husband Rage has been killed when he caught some
people sneak in this house and found out if they are going to steal Rage
grandfather’s treasure. This treasure is very valuable for his family. The
Treasure is one of the one most wanted treasure in the pirate history. And now,
those ‘pirate’ have taken the treasure and the founder’s grandson too. Rage
killed by a Shotgun bullets that launched by the ‘pirate’.
Nothing, Sandy cant does anything. Now she
is powerless. She doesn’t even can call the police or, at
least the ambulance to try to survive her husband. She is powerless. She just
crying and staring at her husband body.
She drops more tears again as like it’s the end of the day.
Later, in the morning when their helpers are
going to cook some breakfast, he found Sandy
and Rage lied on the stairway.
With their clothes full of blood, Mr. Antonie, the helper quickly picked up the
phone and call for the police. He thought that they must be murdered, or else
kill each other. But, he found that
Sandy was still alive when he check their body and found out if Sandy is still
breathing, but not with Rage, which got hit by 3 bullets. He then help Sandy to
stand when she suddenly wakes up. He tell Sandy to stop crying and make Sandy
some breakfast. A toast and a cup of tea. And it makes she happy. And they
married and live happily
You described the story beautifully.
BalasHapusI can deeply sympathize with Sandy< and am now wondering how Sandy will deal with this hardship.
Note: Check again the use of passive voice. XD